fredag 13 januari 2012

summary goldilocks

Summeriser Goldlock
Goldlock is about a little girl with golden hair. She have been walken in the woods a lonng time when she sees a house. The house belongs to three bears that are out and walking cause therir porridge is to hot. The girl walks into the house and eat of everybodys food, sits on everybodys chair and sleeps in everybodys bed. She falls asleep in the smallest bear bed. The bears find her lying in the bed when she wake. She got scared by the bears and never returned to the woods alone.

1 kommentar:

  1. Bra sammanfattning. Tänk på att böja verben (ex; she has, the girl eats, she wakes up). I sista meningen bytes du till preteritum. Försök hålla dig till samma tempus.

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